Posted by noa on May 5, 2004, at 21:23:48
In reply to Re: OK! You guys asked for it, my BEST one yet! :), posted by spoc on May 4, 2004, at 8:25:47
Your story, transformed by many manipulations, linguistic and deletional, but with no added words and with the sequence the same, is now a "found" poem:
How the girl wants to be.
Family around,
Life of clear losses,
that therefore examines the ground.A line interweaving behind the ground,
that has been robbed by time.Existing--the power.
Experiences in the influence of color--
they remain, binding--
Measurement on the basis of skin.Work with these materials!
Inside--disturbance, greater problems.
Far from the ground,
and fused from the little, older edges,
you to the zero,
and order.Many people do not think twice,
they never run once,
and they use the years.With the ground fused, low and clean,
the return occurs--
the used return them, examined.
The connections? Well, the connections bind.Nature--complete, necessary.
A strong measurement, complete.
A certain hour, but they are wanted,
to always return.One memory of finding the right lines,
the best aspect,
the connection of its course,
the territory,
the operation,
one better.And the knowledge to indicate this TRUELY..
poster:noa
thread:340747
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