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Re: Blush, blush, one of my poems..Peeking

Posted by susan C on January 31, 2002, at 18:51:41

In reply to Re: Blush, blush, one of my poems... » Krazy Kat, posted by kid_A on January 31, 2002, at 11:40:20

A kiwi vine is dripping,
Weeping with the rain.

The window glass is streaming,
Distorting wind and strain.

The wind is commanding leaves,
These winter days of chill.

Even though the birds still fly,
and some small creatures remain still.

There are some questions remaining
to answer for some comfort.

Friends from land to land
Receiving messages to sort.

I cant quite get the last four lines right, but I really like the beginning. What do you think?

Mouse chewing on the end of her pencil


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