Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 671327

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Alone.

Posted by crazy teresa on July 28, 2006, at 1:21:03

Alone.
Listening to the snores.
Wishing they were caresses.
Wondering if I’ll ever be what he needs me to be.
What I need me to be.

Tired.
Looking for sleep through tears.
Daring him to notice.
Desperately pleading through silent sobs.
Dreaming what will never be.

Spent.
Lying to all who see.
Carefully doing my time.
Continuing to play the part I thought I wanted.
Clouding any joy that could be.

Impatient.
Lusting for a difference.
Dining on hopelessness.
Denying the good that may exist.
Drifting further from where I want to be.

Restless.
Living eternal days.
Each one filled with hiding.
Endless menial tasks no one sees.
Ending always the same.

Alone.

Re: Alone.

Posted by Joan797 on July 30, 2006, at 8:36:27

In reply to Alone., posted by crazy teresa on July 28, 2006, at 1:21:03

<<Carefully doing my time.
<<Continuing to play the part I thought I wanted.

<<Lusting for a difference.
<<Dining on hopelessness.

<<Drifting further from where I want to be.

<<Endless menial tasks no one sees.
<<Ending always the same.

I want to post your passage on the refridgerator, and yet I know noone will get it.

I'd get a "what is your problem NOW?" speech

Lovely written words that seem to be inside my throat, gurgling, fighting to errupt. Only to spill forth in bits and pieces of gibberish.

Re: Alone. » Joan797

Posted by crazy teresa on August 1, 2006, at 13:25:12

In reply to Re: Alone., posted by Joan797 on July 30, 2006, at 8:36:27

I'm sorry you identify so well. Thank you so much for the validation; you brought tears of relief to my eyes.

Re: Alone. » crazy teresa

Posted by wildcardII on August 3, 2006, at 1:00:52

In reply to Alone., posted by crazy teresa on July 28, 2006, at 1:21:03

you read my mind..........

Re: Alone.

Posted by crazy teresa on August 23, 2006, at 17:19:23

In reply to Alone., posted by crazy teresa on July 28, 2006, at 1:21:03

I was brave.

I showed this to him.

He said it was really sad.

And nothing changed.

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