Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 544130

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Your creation

Posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 20, 2005, at 0:51:40

You left me alone and the vultures got me.
You did it again and the vultures got me.
Im sorry that i was in your way.
I tried not to need you and i tried not to cry, I did.
I was a chore and a burden on you.
I tried to be quiet and not be hungry.
Im sorry that i needed your love.
And i tried not to cry, i did.

I threatened your freedom and i made you feel trapped.
I tried not to need your affection.
Im sorry that i wanted to be nurtured.
And i tried not to cry, I did.

I made you change my sheets again and again.
I tried to stay awake so i wouldnt wet my bed.
Im sorry that i needed you to hug me.
And i tried not to cry, I did.

You left me in that empty house and you didnt come back until the next day.
Im sorry that i missed you.
And i tried not to cry, I did.

You left me at the gas station.
You just drove away.
You discarded me like a piece of trash.
Thats when you should have killed me.

You turned me to stone
Im unable to feel
My heart is hollow
unable to love
I only know emptiness
I only know loneliness

I cry in silence like i always did.

 

Re: Your creation » FlyingKangaroo

Posted by alexandra_k on August 20, 2005, at 16:05:43

In reply to Your creation, posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 20, 2005, at 0:51:40

(((((flying kangaroo)))))

I'm so sorry :-(
i don't know what to say.
i'm so sorry

 

Re: Your creation » alexandra_k

Posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 20, 2005, at 19:38:08

In reply to Re: Your creation » FlyingKangaroo, posted by alexandra_k on August 20, 2005, at 16:05:43

Thanks for the much needed hug :)

 

Re: Your creation » FlyingKangaroo

Posted by alexandra_k on August 20, 2005, at 19:45:19

In reply to Re: Your creation » alexandra_k, posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 20, 2005, at 19:38:08

You are welcome :-)

 

Re: Your creation » FlyingKangaroo

Posted by AdaGrace on August 22, 2005, at 8:07:59

In reply to Your creation, posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 20, 2005, at 0:51:40

Your writing seems to come from within me.

I am so often astounded to read things others write and feel the very same essence of them.

 

Re: Your creation » AdaGrace

Posted by FlyingKangaroo on August 22, 2005, at 16:53:52

In reply to Re: Your creation » FlyingKangaroo, posted by AdaGrace on August 22, 2005, at 8:07:59

Maybe we share similar abusive childhood memories.


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