Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 529071

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Trying a re-write

Posted by dolphinn on July 17, 2005, at 14:41:14

ONE

Do you re
member i read anais nin's little birds
while you sucked my aeorala a rose red
i asked are you listening and you said mmmmm
lifted your head eyes half closed and said every word
quoted one line
then draped your head between my thighs

TWO

my father bends his head over the toilet
you are frail in this twilight i only knew you at dawn
la-u-g-h-t-er
i barely hear you

THREE

i will walk barefoot to mexico
lay naked in black sand feel the sea
wash over my body brush color brush color
o i remember once you said you would be the one
i and basket swinging a cobblestone walk
bare breasts over a sink squeezing
tomato slicing lime cilantro while you
awaken dusk walked naked behind me skim your hands
over my silhouette cup me you sliding in quiet as sunrise

FOUR

i am cold i am worn i knew the language of crows once
i was fluent in tango and mesquite rose from my belly like a cat
i am yellow as my mother and fragile as my father
and i ne

ed you

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